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PostSubject: Icingdeath   Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:30 pm

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Spirit~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Name: Aishingu-Shi; Icingdeath

Visual Age: 19

Looks:

Icingdeath is a dark elf, with pointed ears, dark purplish skin, and white hair. He carries twin scimitars, both with a slight bluish tint to them. He is about five foot, eight inches tall, and has eyes that are a deep, peircing lavender in color. He wears very elegant looking armor, yet at the same time it is simplistic. He wears a green cloak to hide from the sun, and to keep the chill of his home away.

Habits: Icingdeath is often quiet, yet can be very convincing with the few words he does say. He spends his mornings watching the sun rise, and spends the rest of the day defending himself against the wilds of his home.

Inner World: His inner world is not baren, but it might as well be. It is a tundra, reaching from a nearly impossibly high mountain range in the south, to a freezing sea of icey water to the north. The rest in a baren land of snow, save for a single mountain. Kelvins Cairn, where the cave that Icingdeath calls home is located. Daily he must defend his home from the dangerous beasts that roam his land.....Tundra Yeti's, Giant Snow Worms, and even just the sheer freezing wind.

Seasons are a thing of fiction in this desolate land. Fall? Spring? These words have no meaning to Icingdeath. He knows of three different times of the year, the five months of straigh night, the five months of straight sun, and the one month in between them in which the days are normal. The wind almost constantly blows, making whatever temperature this land might truely be at least thirty degrees colder. Yess this land is a wasteland. A wasteland that only the most insane of people could inhabit........And Icingdeath loves it. All of it.

Connection to Master: The connection between Icingdeath and Jor'lo is....Difficult to understand. Are they friends? You could say that. Yet at the same time, you could say they are the worst of enemies. In truth, the most accurate description of their connection would be training partners. But that is too simplistic to explain their relationship.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Sealed~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Type: Twin European Swords

Camo: None

Looks:
They each have four-foot-long blades, and hand-length hilts. The jewels in the hilts are accually an icey blue, rather then the red in the picture. Also, the hilts themselves are not golden. They are pure white, like thick snow.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Shikai~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Stat Increases: (must not exceed more than 15 points combined)

-Attack: 4

-Defense: 2

-Speed: 8

-Magic: 0


Release Phrase: Freeze, Icingdeath

Looks:

Icingdeath's Shikai are twin scimitars, with each blade being four feet long. The blades have a blueish tint, and the white hilts from it's sealed state turn black. The jewels dissapear, and the ends of the hilts round off. Making them more like an oval with pointed tips.

Element: Ice

Special Ability: Protection from fire: As long as his opponent's reiatsu is not higher then fifteen points ahead of him, and he is holding at least one of his blades, Jor'lo will not be affected by any type of fire attack. The fire will not be able to touch him. His clothes will not be burned, nor will his skin. He will barely even feel heat.

Techs: Frost Wave: By slashing either blade in any direction, and by saying the command word "Frost", Jor'lo can create a shower of ice shards that fly straight forward. The shower consists of 250 shards each three inches in diameter at the base, a centimeter in diameter at the point, and one inch in length. Can be used once per post, with a two post cooldown.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Bankai~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Stat Increases: (must not exceed more than 25 points combined)

-Attack: 5

-Defense: 3

-Speed: 11

-Magic: 6


Release Phrase: (optional)

Looks: Icingdeath's Bankai is very simalar to it's Shikai. The blades are the same length, but they are coated in a layer of ice with an edge as sharp as a sword's. The hilt of each scimitar is now blue in color, and each have short, ten inch chains hanging from them. Jor'lo's hair turns white, and his Haori is replaced with the same green cloak that his Zanpakto spirt wears.

Element: Ice

Special Ability: Icingdeath's Bankai also protects Jor'lo from fire while he holds at least one blade, but it protects him from fire from an opponent that has a reiatsu that is up to twenty points higher than Jor'lo's.

Techs: Frost Wave: As with his Shikai, when Jor'lo slashes either blade in either direction and says the command word "Frost", he can create a shower of ice shards that launch straight ahead. The shards are the same size, but in Bankai there are 500 shards instead of the 250 that his Shikai consisted of. Can be used once per post, with a three post cooldown.

Ice Storm. By grabbing either one of the chains hanging from the hilt of either of his scimitars and swinging the scimitar in a circle above him, Jor'lo can create a twister that holds 1,000 shards of ice, each only one-and-a-half inches in diameter at the base and only a half inch long, each of which spin inside the twister. Lasts one post, and has a five post cooldown.
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PostSubject: Re: Icingdeath   Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:01 pm

Righto, let's get right to it.

1. Image size: Shrink some of your images, they're stretching the screen

2. Fire Protection: Two part concern
First being that, does it really make sense for fire to be weak against Ice? Typically, fire beats ice. You know? It melts it. Just an observation on a hard to sell point for you.

Second is that, if there is a single element impervious sort of sense here, then there has to be an equal weakness somewhere. Also keep in mind that, if it's fire, then it's ONLY fire. Meaning, other superheated techniques such as high friction kido, cero, and bala will still affect you normally.

3. Frost Wave:
How far does it travel and what's the cone area it affects? or does it travel in a line?

How does it affect stronger foes?

What's its build? Does it just shoot giant icicles or does it freeze people? If it does, to what degree and how does it vary on the enemy's power?

4. Shikai Stats: You're missing one point

5. Bankai Special Ability:

Lower those point requirements, that's waaaaaaaay too much, even for a bankai. You're talking about somebody literally 20 levels higher than you not being able to override you? No-go. Better yet though, reference the power gap system in regards to attack vs defense in the Reference section for the stats and conform all of your abilities to that.

6. Ice Storm: So, what exactly does he do with this giant twister of ice? Does it do something?
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PostSubject: Re: Icingdeath   Mon Mar 21, 2011 8:48 am

Ok, I will gladly do everything you asked me to do, but first I need to know something.....ummm.....How EXACTLY do I shrink the picture size?.....And no, I am NOT a noob for not knowing this.
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PostSubject: Re: Icingdeath   Mon Mar 21, 2011 9:17 am

use a client like imageshack.com

You can freely upload and edit image size there
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