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PostSubject: Noah Johnson   Thu Mar 17, 2011 3:11 pm

Arrancar

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~General Information~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Name: Johnson, Noah

Alias: Dead Eye

Gender: Male

Age: 138

Visual Age: 30

Rank: fraccion to the cero espada

Sexual Orientation: Straight

Extra Information:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Additional Information~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*This stuff is optional

Blood Type: O+

Family Members: none

Birth Date: April 7th, 1873

Star Sign: Aries

Favorite Food: Any form of Beef(Steak, Beef stew, Ribs ect.), Bison, Rabbit, Snake, basically any available food he could find on his travels, in the wild west.

Least Favorite Food: anything sweet.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Appearance~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

General Appearance: Noah has the rugged exterior of a famous wild west outlaw, and with good reason, he was one, perhaps one of the greatest. The former bandit, stands at roughly six feet tall, he appears to be in good shape as well, his chest and shoulders are broad, and his muscles are well toned and defined, this is due to the amount of physical preparation he put himself through, while running from the law. Noah’s skin tone appears to be slightly tanned, due to prolonged exposure to the sun. Noah keeps his hair at about shoulders length, he also just simple comes it back, and surprisingly, it is relatively straight.

The rough and tough outlaw’s face almost always has a permanent angry look on it, though this is contradictory to his actual personality, which is quite easy going. Aside from looking angry, Noah’s face is also accented with a few scars, there is one that runs across the bridge of his nose, and two that mark his right cheek. The outlaw, also has a small beard. Noah’s eyes are a light brown color, though on occasion, it appears as though his left eye glows a redish orange color.

Since becoming a fraccion, Noah has tried to keep his same style of clothing that he wore during his life. It starts with a simple white button up shirt, which he keeps the sleeve rolled up on, Noah then proceeds to wear a black vest over the jacket, and a white duster coat over that. Moving on to Noah’s lower half, he is seen wearing a pair of white pants, held up by a black belt, with a skull belt buckle, also hanging from his waist is a black gun holster, and to cap all this off, he wears a pair of black cowboy boots with silver spurs. Noah also slightly accessorizes his attire as well, with a white cowboy hat, and a pair of black gloves.
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Hollow Hole Location: the center of his left hand.

Hollow Mask Remains: the remains of Noah’s mask can be found, surrounding his left eye, it covers his brow, and wraps around the side of his face, ending just below his left eye.

Tattoo Location: the tattoo that Noah was branded with, which also signifies his rank, is located on his right pectoral.

Reiatsu Color: Rust, the color tint is a redish orange color.

Height: roughly six feet

Weight: 200lbs

Body Type: Noah’s body would seem pretty average, it’s not thin and it isn’t large either, it’s somewhere in the middle, with well toned muscles, a wide chest, and broad shoulders.

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Persona~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Personality: Noah is both an outlaw and a gentleman, though he did what he could to survive, such as rob and murder, the outlaw also came off as a bit charming, he had a way with people, it was almost hard to hate him for what he had done. This being said, Dead eye had an image to up hold, he is cocky, arrogant, and sly. Noah had a way with words, and had a way of manipulating others.

The famous outlaw, was also cunning and intelligent, this played a major part in his long lasting survival in the wild, and on the run. Noah is also well mannered and often cant stand when things aren’t done properly, or when he isn’t treated with an equal level of respect. Noah had a way about him, that seemed to embody the very spirit of the west, he was free and wild, untamed and rugged. Dead eye is also considered to be one of the few outlaws that glorified the wild west, though there were no stories ever written about the man who was never caught.

The merciful bandit stands out from most of his race, while most are willing to kill and punish, Noah sees to it that everyone is given a chance, unless he deems that they don’t deserve it based upon their actions and attitude towards him. The outlaw also comes of as a bit laid back and easy going, with no one to chase after him anymore, the once proud and feared man has gotten a bit lazy in his days as an espada, this however, does not stop him from acting on impulse, he can also come off as a bit of a clown with his odd tall tails and carefree nature.

When the outlaw arrancar is engaged in battle, he is very calm and relaxed, he doesn’t let many things distract him, and he studies his enemies like a book, often letting no detail go unnoticed. He will show his opponent a degree of respect, but still wont think twice about insulting them or egging them on, into a trap.

Likes: Freedom, reading, sharp shooting, playing cards, playing liars dice, smoking, and occasionally drinking.

Dislikes: the law, shinigami, being disrespected, being bothered for no apparent reason whatsoever.

Goals: like most other Arrancar, Noah strives to serve the hollow king and live out his plans. Noah seeks to become stronger, but without seeking a promotion, he would much rather retain his position and just build up his skills and strength. The one other thing Noah strives to do, is be seen as the deadliest sharp shooter in all of hueco mundo.

Insecurities:

Fears: not being able to become stronger or being able to improve. Noah also fears not living up to his usefulness to the Hollow King.

Strengths:
*accuracy- above all else, Noah’s accuracy is deadly, very deadly, it is perhaps one of the best. He practices his sharp shooting skills on a daily basis and has fine tuned them to a high degree.
*Hand to Hand- Noah is a skilled hand to hand fighter, he was taught at a young age, and always took time out of his day to get better, he knew there would be situations where he would be caught without a gun.
*Cero- the outlaw looks at his cero as just another form of bullet, with himself as the gun, he trains night and day to perfect this art and when combined with his insane accuracy, this arrancar can dish out some pain.
*Knife combat- not to say Noah isn’t skilled with a sword, but he is at his deadliest, when he is wielding a knife, which happens to be what his sealed weapon is.


Weaknesses:
*Speed- speed is a big issue that Noah has faced throughout his years as an espada, of all the things to train, this is usually the last area that Noah thinks about.
*close quarters combat- though Noah knows how to fight with his fists, he is better known for his ranged fighting tactics, and is often overtaken in close quarter combat.

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Extra Information:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~History~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Bio:
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PostSubject: Re: Noah Johnson   Thu Mar 17, 2011 8:08 pm

in your appearance, the last paragraph says "Since he became an Espada". He's a fraccion, not an espada. change that and any reference to him being an espada.

Reiatsu color: Rust? Rust as in light or dark brown? Explain a bit more.

Strengths:

Accuracy. If you're a fraccion, your accuracy wouldnt be the best. Sorry. Tone that done.


History:
Thousands of souls make up an Arrancar's being. Remembering the life as a human is likely impossible. Rid your app of the human life. Explain your life as an average hollow, and how you leveled up. Make this part very descriptive. Then of course you'd be a Menos Grande. Explain how YOUR soul dominated the others and gained independence, and then about more training and comsuming. How his general skills formed, and then about his transformation to adjuchas. As with the others, describe this part with lots of detail, with strengths, weaknesses, and challenges of course, then your transition to an Arrancar, and from then on, how you became the Cero's Fraccion.

(Sorry if i was being a bit bland. This is all that needs to be fixed and i didnt feel like sprucing it up with pretty words and tons of description)

Fix all that, namely the history. Rid your human life and explain THOROUGHLY the life as a hollow and the stages until you became an arrancar, then from there until you became a fraccion.
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PostSubject: Re: Noah Johnson   Fri Mar 18, 2011 2:53 am

edited, sorry if the history is to long, i kind of got carried away when i was writing it.
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PostSubject: Re: Noah Johnson   Sat Mar 19, 2011 11:55 pm

I've been reviewing this as I was posting in the Karakura topic, that's how I did this quicker than you would have thought. And all seems nice, and all seems fixed. Congratulations.
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