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PostSubject: Musuko Taiyo   Wed Mar 09, 2011 7:25 am

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~General Information~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Name: Taiyo, Musuko

Alias:

Gender: Male

Age: 215

Visual Age: 20

Rank: Captain

Division: Twelfth

Sexual Orientation: Straight

Extra Information: (optional. Things that didn’t go into the other categories would go here)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Additional Information~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*This stuff is optional

Blood Type: b positive

Family Members: Musuko doesn't remember them.

Birth Date: November 23rd

Star Sign:

Favorite Food: Any type of Mexican food, but Tacos especially, just minus any vegies, as they fall into the category of foods his hates.

Least Favorite Food: Salads of any variety, or most vegetables, few exceptions apply, but overall He dislikes vegetables, as well as most soups.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Appearance~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

General Appearance: Musuko is very slightly above average height, though not at all a giant. He has sandy blond hair, and and dark blue eyes. He always wears a pair of black fingerless gloves, and elbow pads, though they are somewhat hidden by his shinigami uniform. He is mostly leg, and they are quite long, taking approximately a third of his height. His arms come down to just above his knees, high way down his thighs. He has a dark blue/ purple tattoo of tendrils of smoke on his left arm coming from the elbow.

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Reiatsu Color: Musuko's Reiatsu is a dark shade of blue, midnight blue

Height: 6'4”

Weight:160

Body Type: Thin yet muscular, though the muscles are mostly hidden, and difficult to identify from the rest of the body.

Extra Information: (optional. Things that didn’t go into the other categories would go here)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Persona~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Personality: Musuko is kind, caring and sensitive to others feelings. He is a very sympathetic person who can easily relate to anyone else's problems. He is also very creative with his ways of helping, usually allowing the other person to discover the solution themselves. He is very laid back and calm most of the time, never seen angry. Has a very slow to rise temper, though when it does finally reach a point where his temper gets the better of him, it really gets the better of him.

Musuko is also one who tries his hardest to keep his promises, no matter how insubstantial. He will never give up on anything, even things others see as a lost cause, and this causes him much pain, physically and mentally. Though he is able to take incredible amounts of damage. His endurance is quite high.

He is also a ladies man, or at least tries to be. He is very cool and collected, which helps a lot, but he doesn't have a way with words when it comes to women, he has a difficult time in speaking to them without awkward moments springing up, but despite that women still seem to like him. When he is helping them through a difficult time he knows exactly what to say, never faltering for words. He is a very social person, trying to incorporate himself into most peoples daily lives, no matter how small a role he may play.

Musuko is a certified genius, especially when it comes to building things. He has made several things from practically nothing, take them apart and build something completely different. He is also quite the experimentive type. He always is trying new things, hoping for some sort of breakthrough. He has had little success, but several of his creations have become common items, or are on their way to becoming common, like his soldier pills, and revival cookies, two items he made just after joining the twelfth division.

Musuko has never made anything one hundred percent flawlessly, but most of his side effects are minor. Nothing life threatening, or else he would never had let it become available to the public. Musuko is a good leader, never forcing his men to do anything, he simply puts it in ways that they can not refuse, making it seem like a simple thing, something logical that would be rude to refuse. He dislikes giving orders, though he will should his men refuse to do what he asks them to, but only if it is absolutely necessary, which rarely happens.

Likes: Hard rock, heavy metal music, and company, especially of the female variety. He enjoys tinkering with things, and making things.

Dislikes: Country and pop music, rudeness, arrogance, and self-centered beings. Also dislike being forced to give orders, and prefers to have his men accept his offers.

Goals: Musuko's goals are simple, perfect equality for all races, perfect peace between anyone,living and dead. He strives for this nigh unreachable goal, and clings to it, trying his best to advance it, even through the smallest actions.

Insecurities: (optional)

Fears: Musuko fears another war between the races that will obliterate the world. He also fears that this is inevitable, and that no matter what he, or anyone else, does it will happen. Also he is deadly afraid of scorpions.

Strengths: Physically and mentally enduring, strong. Intellectual, good with words.

Weaknesses: Surprisingly slow for his size, and not very agile. Nor is he at all good with Kido.

Phobias: Musuko has an irrational fear of scorpions.

Extra Information: Quirk: Always seen with small pieces in his hands, assembling and disassembling various little gadgets and trinkets.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~History~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Bio: Musuko spent very little time in leaving the area he had died in, as it was a horrid place, and he wanted to forget it forever. He questioned everything, how he was still alive, why there was a broken chain dangling from his chest, why everything was so... out of the ordinary. Why had the bombs been dropped? Why had his entire family been outside during that lethal rainstorm. He ran blindly through the bomb destroyed terrain, which seemed to no longer interest him, which Intrigued Musuko. Why on earth was he not interested? What happened to him? He never got his answers as he continued to run from his past, his dead family, none of whom he would ever see again.

He stopped outside of town, out of breath, and bent over, panting, tears streaming down his face, steaming in the frigid weather. He could hear nothing except for the sounds of bombs dropping, and sirens wailing. He leaned against a tree, and stared blankly at the woods around him, a distinct smell of smoke pervaded the air. He turned his head slightly to one side, noting that the forest he sat in was slowly burning, the fire spreading, well like wild fire. He could feel the heat, but didn't burn, didn't feel pain from the heat, only the temperature of the flames, as they were a safe distance away still.

Musuko suddenly got to his feet, and walked straight back to town, an odd feeling in the back of his mind. He felt as if something important was going to happen in town, and that he needed to be there to experience it. He stumbled through the wreckage of the town he had called home and gazed upon the destroyed ruins of his life. He spotted what remained of his work, his boss's house, and even his wives parents home. He stopped dead in his tracks in the center of town, and stared at a mountain of rubble, a lone figure dressed in a black kimono stood atop it.

Musuko blinked several times, mouth working without sound, before he stepped closer, the figure now taking notice of him, and turning to face him properly. Musuko cocked an eyebrow at the stranger, noticing the katana sheathed at her, at least he thought it was a her, waist. She eyed Musuko carefully, her eyes lingering on the chain protruding from his chest. The female descended upon Musuko, drawing her sword as she approached, causing him to flinch and retreat. She paused, and her expression softened, and she crouched, saying soothing words to Musuko.

Musuko fell backwards over a block of jagged concrete, landing on his behind on the side of the street, or what was left of it at least. The woman approached and smiled down at Musuko, gently tapping him on the forehead with the hilt of her blade, murmuring something that sounded like go in peace. Musuko's eyes widened, and before he knew what was happening, everything around him was gone.

Musuko awoke in a completely different place than where he had been, not that he remembered where he been, nor anything except for his name. He had no idea where he was, nor why he was surrounded by people, nor anything. He just stared up at the ceiling of the building he was in. He was than given clothing, and other such things by some of the people, and brought out of the room. He was lead to a rather large building, and that was when he first entered the Soul Academy.

Musuko had no idea what was happening to him, only that he was being dragged to an academy in the soul society, wherever that was. He looked at the building and gasped eyes widening, he turned to the people guiding him, hoping for an explanation, only than noticing the swords at all their waists, or for some strapped across their backs. He stared at the weapons, momentarily distracted, before demanding answers to his questions.

The shinigami, or at least that's what they called themselves, explained that when a person dies their soul moves on to the next world, or the Soul society. Musuko blinked at this statement and looked around himself, so this was heaven eh? Wasn't really much to look at. They explained to him their duties, which would be his soon apparently, and the things that required them to wear their weapons. Hollows. The very name seemed send shivers down Musuko's spine. He swallowed the lump in his throat, and asked them why they were taking him to the academy.

The rolled their eyes and explained to him that his spiritual pressure was enormous, but unstable, and out of control, which he would need to learn to control. He turned back to the building, as they told him that he would learn many things besides, such as swordsmanship, kido and shunpo. Musuko's brow furrowed,but he didn't question as they lead him inside telling him that all will be explained fully inside. He accepted this fact and entered. His training had begun.

His years in the academy area blur of leaning, practicing and fighting. All that he remembers clearly is the day of graduation. The day he was placed into a division, as nothing more than a regular shinigami, but this would change, and soon. He had been placed in the eighth division, as he had shown no exceptional skill in any aspect of specialization. But after a while his creative, inventive side showed up, and he was immediately transferred to the twelfth division. He was now an unseated officer. He quickly gained fame for his inventions, his interesting discoveries, and his various other capabilities. He jumped through the ranks, and became the third seat.

During this time, he went on various assignments, both for his cruel asshole of a captain, and for the captains of other divisions, but those were mostly them asking him to make them things. His experiments were not very successful at first, and Musuko knew why, his captain was sabotaging him. He was envious of Musuko's skill and expertise in this area. Musuko never found any concrete proof to bring forward, so he never pressed the matter.

He wanted to become more respected, more looked up to, and to do this he needed to become higher ranking, meaning defeating the lieutenant of the division. He challenged him, and was delivered a crushing defeat, as Musuko had no shikai at this time, so he was easily overpowered and outmatched. So Musuko left, the area where he had lost, a new goal to attain, shikai.

It was not hard for Musuko to get his shikai, as his sword was eager to talk to him, wanting to impart to him it's secrets. But Musuko still had some training to do for it. He trained himself so hard, that each day he required a few of his inventions he had made, items that restored both physical, and mental injury and exertion. He finally did achieve shikai, and he rejoiced. He again challenged the lieutenant, who was only mildly annoyed at this, as he liked Musuko, but was not one who liked to be challenged multiple times.

Though this time he wasn't expecting what happened, Musuko easily out fighting him, every move he countered, blocking each slash, each thrust, avoiding of nullifying his Kido, outpacing him with shunpo,that the lieutenant was forced to resort to his shikai. Everyone sighed, as it looked so promising for Musuko, but now he had absolutely no way to win, he couldn't compete with a shikai without his own. Musuko grinned, as he facing down his opponents attcks without so much as flinching.

Finally Musuko decided to end it, activating his own shikai, much to everyone's surprise, allowing him to again overpower the lieutenant, and defeat him, asserting himself above the other, taking his rank for his own.

In private, away from the peering eyes of his peers, Musuko continued to train and train. After decades of training he had finally managed to unleash his bankai. He was ecstatic, all his hard work had finally begun to pay of. He knew that he had to keep it quiet, for now. Until the day he had had enough of his cruel manipulating captain, he used the members of the division as his personal slaves, forcing them to conduct his experiments, shouting and cursing, even resorting to physical assault to make them cooperate. And to make sure none of them ever succeeded in the tasks he gave them he sabotaged their work, stealing what they had achieved, and turned it into his own work. Musuko was one of the worst affected by this, as one of his failed experiments killed the third seat, the man he had beaten for his current spot as lieutenant. that was where Musuko had decided to draw the line.

Musuko challenged his captain to a fight, and the overconfident captain agreed to ”show Musuko some respect for his superiors”. Musuko was able to hold his own easily against the captain, while they were both still in sealed state. But once the captain went Shikai it seemed as if Musuko was done for, until he himself released, again matching the captain in power.

The fight lasted for quite some time, both of them giving and receiving wounds from each other, and finally as the sun was rising on the next day did Musuko's captain decided to end it, gloating about how his bankai would destroy Musuko once and for all. Musuko beat him to it, and released his own bankai, astounding all the onlookers, and the captain himself was startled so much that he was unable to release his own bankai, and Musuko defeated him.

Musuko was than promoted to the captaincy, and the previous captain left his division. Musuko was eager to begin making things fair for all shinigami, starting in his own division. He began to look upon his men more as equals and less on their actual rank, unless required. He has been leading like this for quite some time now.


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PostSubject: Re: Musuko Taiyo   Wed Mar 09, 2011 12:12 pm

ok i see a few things wrong here. shouldn't take to much time.

1. I think your age is alittle to young. at 150 you would look about like toshiro, I'd say about 200 if you wanta look 20 bud.

2. your appearance pic is one of the most overused one of all time, with that being said, how bout you give me a written description as well to prove your indifference?

3. I'd say you need to up your body weight to around 160 if you want your body type to make sense. right now its not really balanced

4. Your personality is alittle lacking here. You don't have anything that tells me smart or like experiments and all that for division 12 captain. Your a ladies man but "don't know the words" to say to them? confusing. how much of a leader is he? does he favor or dislike orders?

5. Nothing that you need to change, but i had to laugh at your phobia. I hope we met on the battlefield XD

6. your bio is alittle off too, you spend almost half your bio on your time as a soul where it doesn't really matter since how you became a shinigami doesn't really impact you further. You don't have any time in the rukongai as you said you were just "thrown into the academy". not that its a bad thin but i'd explain it more since it replaces a good chunk of your life (might explain why your not to old either)

6.b. your weakness and your bio don't match. apparently you are agile enough for division 2 which isn't likely. and its rare for someone who doesn't excel at stealth to be in that division.You also have where you learned bankai but not shikai, i suggest adding that in their somewhere. Also you can go into some time as a squad member, maybe explain some of your more frustrating experiments, private studies, experiments that changed your personality because they harmed someone or something like that. your division 12 captain, I expect you to be creative here.

6.c. You need to go into why your captain was so mean you decided to challenge him, maybe past experiences or seeing him use squad members as test dummies or something.
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PostSubject: Re: Musuko Taiyo   Wed Mar 09, 2011 6:48 pm

Edited everything as required,though I left the bit about his time as a soul, though I can easily remove it, should it be required.
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PostSubject: Re: Musuko Taiyo   Wed Mar 09, 2011 7:15 pm

I only saw one thing in your bio that needs changing this time and thats the time in between gaining shikai and bankai. You said you gained bankai not long after shikai which is not acceptable. It takes about 100 years to gain bankai so its close to impossible that you gained it so fast. Besides that though everything looks fine
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PostSubject: Re: Musuko Taiyo   Wed Mar 09, 2011 7:20 pm

Fixed^^
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PostSubject: Re: Musuko Taiyo   Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:32 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Musuko Taiyo   Thu Mar 10, 2011 2:24 pm

Forgot to give you your level man, sorry. level 25

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